Go home

In class we read three poem and our teacher told us that we had to choose one of it poem and write an own poems about the poem we choose

Here is my poem:

I go home very tired 

I have my breakfast 

I say hello to my sister

I go to sleep.

I tell about my lovely to my mother

When I tell the marks she put ungry

But I now that she love me.

My sister hate me 

But when I need help she helps me

She is all the time playing with the tablet

I love a girl but she didn't love me

I show all my love to her 

She see me with a dark face