At the middle of the video the man manage to reach the bottom of the cage and the woman threw herself on the floor, when the man saw the woman in the floor he goes down to see what happened. When the woman open her eyes was surprised and she hurt him.
At the end of the video the girl goes out of the cage and when she saw him in the cage hurt she enter into the cage and she try to help him to go out by pushing him by the arm but she couldn't got it.
In conclusion, I think that the Man was the father and the woman was the daughter and they wanted to go home.
You need to rewrite this piece of work, since it´s more a summary of the video than a literary essay.
ResponderBorrar- Introduction: You haven´t got a thesis statement that answers the question "What is your interpretation of this music video?" Remember you should explain three symbolic elements: the man, the girl and the cage.
- Body: You start your analysis from the middle of the video. Why? Analyse what happens at the beginning so as to have a full essay.
You have described two moments but you haven´t written about your interpretation: What do you think all these actions represent or communicate as regards these two characters and their relationship? Who are they? What do they feel and why do they act as they do?
The conclusion is fine but you could expand on it by answering why the song is called "Elastic Heart" and a personal reflection about the main theme: parents, children and home.
Publish your new version for Monday 10th, April.
I agree with Miss Laura, Santi!! I´m sure you´ll improve your piece a lot by following her comments and advice. Go ahead!
ResponderBorrarSantiago: You are almost ten days late for your final publication.
ResponderBorrarFinal mark: 5 (five)